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First of all, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the atmosphere is like. There is a regular restaurant in my neighborhood that I often go to. It is one of my favorite restaurants.It\'s a pork belly restaurant. I like it because the meat and side dishes are delicious. It\'s a very small, old, humble shop, but it serves the best food. It\'s a healing food for me.
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I agree, Mia, that the taste of the food should be the restaurant\'s priority before thinking of aesthetics. Very good job!
-Khai
First of all, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the atmosphere is like.
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>> First of all, in my opinion, I think restaurants should taste better than what they look like and what the ambience is like.
There is a regular restaurant in my neighborhood that I often go to.
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>> There is an ordinary restaurant in my neighborhood that I usually go to.
It is one of my favorite restaurants.
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It\'s a pork belly restaurant.
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>> It is a restaurant that has pork belly as its specialty.
I like it because the meat and side dishes are delicious.
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>> I enjoy it because the meat and sides are delicious.
It\'s a very small, old, humble shop, but it serves the best food.
>> It\'s a very small, old, and humble shop, but it serves the best food.
It\'s a healing food for me.
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>> It is a comforting food for me.
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