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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"What would you feel if someone were racist against your county?”
If they are not violent, I will ignore them.
I don\'t think they’re worth people who judge me just based on my nationality.
If they use violence, I will call the police.
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Hi, Jessica!
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I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)
YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
If they are not violent, I will ignore them.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> If they are not violent to me, I will just ignore them.
I don\'t think they’re worth people who judge me just based on my nationality.
>> I also don\'t think that people judge me by just my nationality.
If they use violence, I will call the police.
>> However, if they use violence, I will call the police.
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