homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, T. Sharon! This is my homework.
I usually watch my phone in 30 minutes before I go to bed. So it interrupts my sleep. But watching phone is very funny. Thus, I can\'t stop watching my phone before I sleep.
Bye Bye!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Irene!
Thank you for keeping an open mind about writing.
You understood the question perfectly.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usually watch my phone in 30 minutes before I go to bed.
>> I usually look at my phone for 30 minutes before I go to bed.
So it interrupts my sleep.
>> It actually keeps me from sleeping.
But watching phone is very funny.
>> I do enjoy looking at my phone.
Thus, I can\'t stop watching my phone before I sleep.
>> I really can\'t stop looking at my phone before I go to sleep.
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