homework
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Homework
ESSAY (Please write a short essay to answer the question.)
> What is your favorite weekend activity? How often do you do it?
My favorite weekend activity is just walking and talking go outside with someone like girlfriend or friends.Maybe I think every week I doing it
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Thank you for this Jade!
My favorite weekend activity is just walking and talking go outside with someone like girlfriend or friends.
>>> My favorite weekend activity is just walking and going out to hang out with someone like girlfriend or friends.
Maybe I think every week I doing it
>>> I think I probably do it every week.
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