Homework
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Q: What do you think old age is like?
A: I think old age is a peaceful period of life.
I think there\'s less things to do if they\'re old because they don\'t need to work, or usually they don\'t even need to do chores.
So, I think people would be peaceful if they\'re old.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think there\'s less things to do if they\'re old because they don\'t need to work, or usually they don\'t even need to do chores.
3. So, I think people would be peaceful if they\'re old.
Thank you for answering your homework.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think old age is a peaceful period of life.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think there\'s less things to do if they\'re old because they don\'t need to work, or usually they don\'t even need to do chores.
>>I think there are lesser things to do if they\'re old because they don\'t need to work, or usually they don\'t even need to do the chores.
3. So, I think people would be peaceful if they\'re old.
>>So, I think people would be peaceful once they\'re old.
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