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I made a work of art when I was [이름]. But it\'s been a long time, so I don\'t remember much. When I was [이름], I did a lot of work activities at school, and among them, I remember making works using the collage technique. The materials for collage are made using various material materials such as colored paper, magazines, cloth, and leaf paper. For collage, a sketchbook is drawn and the work is completed by attaching ingredients. I think the process of opening and attaching the paper one by one was interesting and fun.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing an artwork that you\'ve made when you were [이름], Mia. Have you kept this artwork? I hope that you enjoyed reminiscing about this.
-Khai
I made a work of art when I was [이름].
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>> I made an artwork when I was [이름].
But it\'s been a long time, so I don\'t remember much.
>> CORRECT
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>> But it was a long time ago, so I don’t remember much.
When I was [이름], I did a lot of work activities at school, and among them, I remember making works using the collage technique.
>> CORRECT
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>> I did a lot of activities at school, and one of them was making a collage.
The materials for collage are made using various material materials such as colored paper, magazines, cloth, and leaf paper.
>> The collage was made using various materials such as colored papers, magazines, cloth, and leaf paper.
For collage, a sketchbook is drawn and the work is completed by attaching ingredients.
>> A sketchbook was drawn and after which, the materials were used to complete the artwork.
I think the process of opening and attaching the paper one by one was interesting and fun.
>> I think the process of arranging and attaching the papers one by one was interesting and fun.
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