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I agree with Haze\'s opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is a lot of information and I can find information in live.
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Hello, Henry!
Thanks for sharing you insights! The vast amount of information available on the Internet and the ability to access it in real-time are definitely its greatest advantages.
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Haze\'s opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is a lot of information and I can find information in live.
>> I agree with Hazel\'s opinion because I think the best advantage of the Internet is the abundance of information, and I can access it in real-time.
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