Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I don\'t like living on the main street.
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>> I prefer not to have my house on the main road.
I prefer flat land to high buildings.
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>> I would choose a flat land over a high building.
In my opinion, the best place to raise a family is a place with good [이름]light and wind, a small yard, sidewalks around the house, and a stable, quiet neighborhood.
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>> For me, the best place to raise a family is a house that gets good [이름]light and wind. Also, it would be good if it had a small yard and sidewalks around the house. Lastly, a stable and quiet neighborhood.
Also, it would be better if public transportation was convenient.
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>> It is a plus if the public transportation in the area is also convenient.
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