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2012-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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1) Speak you English? - Can you speak English? 2) What can I for you do? - What can I do for you? 3) Where live you? - Where are you live? 4) Played you football? - Did you play football? 5) From where do you come ? - Where do you come from? I watched the drama the title of 'love rain' yesterday. Yun-A who is a member of 'Girls generation' is main charactor. I noticed that she is very beautiful, cute, pure, innocent, attractive... I like her very much!! Yesterday, the male charactor kissed her in front of a fountain for 3 times. Today news called it '3 levels of fountain kiss'. By the way, I couldn't s[이름]p yesterday cause of fluttering my heart. I joined Yun-A's fan cafe more to see her picture. My friend Hyo-Jung said that I was crazy. But she admitted the fact that Yun-A was attractive. I also agreed both of her opinion. Yun-A is 21 olds, I'm 35 olds. I thought I seemed a mere child.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name], two thumbs up in making your homework again!:) And I think you\'re not crazy in joining Yun A\'s fun cafe to see more of her pictures. I think you are her number one fan, kkkk. We\'ll talk more about that later in our class Miss. [Name]..:) Teacher Cam^^ 1) Speak you English? - Can you speak English?>>correct2) What can I for you do? - What can I do for you?>>correct3) Where live you? - Where are you live?>>Where do you live?4) Played you football? - Did you play football?>>correct5) From where do you come ? - Where do you come from?>>Where are you from?I watched the drama the title of \'love rain\' yesterday. >>I watched the drama entitled \"Love Rain\" yesterday.Yun-A who is a member of \'Girls generation\' is main charactor. >>Yun A who is a member of the Girl\'s Generation is the main character of the drama.I noticed that she is very beautiful, cute, pure, innocent, attractive... >>correctI like her very much!! >>correctYesterday, the male charactor kissed her in front of a fountain for 3 times. >>correctToday news called it \'3 levels of fountain kiss\'. >>Today\'s news called it \"3 levels of fountain kiss\"By the way, I couldn\'t s[이름]p yesterday cause of fluttering my heart. >>By the way, I couldn\'t s[이름]p yesterday because my heart was fluterring.I joined Yun-A\'s fan cafe more to see her picture. >>correctMy friend Hyo-Jung said that I was crazy. >>correctBut she admitted the fact that Yun-A was attractive. >>correctI also agreed both of her opinion. >>I also agreed with her opinion.Yun-A is 21 olds, I\'m 35 olds. I thought I seemed a mere child. >>Yun A is 21 years old and I\'m 35. I thought that I\'m just a mere child.

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