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2024-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

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I used to be stressed out, because it seems to be related to a perfect and responsible personality. Moderate stress is a driving force in life and a force in achieving something.When I was stressed, I had no appetite as a physical symptom, so I lost my desire to eat something and lost weight. Another experience was that I could not concentrate on what to do and what to do.

강사 첨삭

Stress can cause many negative effects on our lives. We must know how to deal with or manage them. Good work, Mia. ^^
-Khai

I used to be stressed out, because it seems to be related to a perfect and responsible personality.

>> I used to be stressed out. My stress seems to be related to a perfect and responsible personality.

Moderate stress is a driving force in life and a force in achieving something.

>> Moderate stress is a driving force in life and that force is to achieve something.

When I was stressed, I had no appetite as a physical symptom, so I lost my desire to eat something and lost weight. 

>> CORRECT

Another experience was that I could not concentrate on what to do and what to do.

>> Another experience was that I could not concentrate on what to do and what not to do.

OR

>> In addition to that, I had a difficult time choosing what needed to be done.


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