Homework
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Q: What are some things that you can never buy online?
A: I think it would be animals, cars, and houses.
For those three, if people buy them online, it would be hard to deliver and it would be hard for them to check if those are okay or not.
Also, they might be dangerous because those are all expensive.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. For those three, if people buy them online, it would be hard to deliver and it would be hard for them to check if those are okay or not.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think it would be animals, cars, and houses.
>>CORRECT!
>>If people buy those three online, it would be hard to deliver them and check if they are okay or not.
3. Also, they might be dangerous because those are all expensive.
>>Also, buying them might be dangerous because they are all expensive.
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