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Actually I don’t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make.
one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(미역국).
One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it.
So that’s why I can make Sea mustard soup.
It’s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)
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Hi Su,
one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(미역국).
So that’s why I can make Sea mustard soup.
It’s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)
I think I\'ve tasted sea mustard soup before, and I liked it. It was a pre-made pack though so, I\'m not sure if it tastes the same when cooked from scratch.
-Teacher Ash
Actually I don’t like cook at home well so there are just a few dishes I can make.
>> Actually, I don\'t like to cook so there are just a few dishes that I can make.
one of my favorite home-cooked is sea mustard soup(미역국).
>> One of my favorite home-cooked dishes is sea mustard soup (미역국).
One day I wanted to make it for my family birthday and I leaned to make about it.
>> I want to cook one for my family on their birthday. So, I learned how to cook it.
So that’s why I can make Sea mustard soup.
>> So, that is why I can make sea mustard soup.
It’s so easy cook and useful to who I like peoples birthday you know.. so I like it :)
>>It is so easy to cook, and it is also advantageous because you can cook it for people you know especially on their birthdays. That is why I like it.
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