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I think schood hours should not shift to a later time. The reason is I don\'t want to school finish late time. If I go to the school later time I have to be gone to academy in late and I have to sleep late.
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Hello, Henry!
I see your point. It\'s important to consider how changes in school hours can affect other activities like academy and sleep schedules.
~ Teacher Maxine
>> I think school hours should not be shifted to a later time.
The reason is I don\'t want to school finish late time.
>> The reason is I don\'t want school to finish late.
If I go to the school later time I have to be gone to academy in late and I have to sleep late.
>> If I go to school later, I have to go to the academy late and I have to sleep late.
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