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When I first learned to drive, I was 21 years old. At that time, I thought I needed a driver\'s license, and I enrolled in a driver\'s license school with the money I earned from a part-time job. The tuition was about 700,000 won ($ 506). I still remember what the private instructor said at that time. \"If the direction I want to go is to the right, turn the steering wheel to the right; if it\'s to the left, turn the steering wheel to the left.\"
He words were very simple and easy to understand. Cars are essential to our lives. If you have a child who is going to be an adult, we encourage you to get a driver\'s license.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your first experience in driving, Mia. Now I think that I really should learn how to drive too.
-Khai
When I first learned to drive, I was 21 years old.
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>> I was 21 years old when I first learned how to drive.
At that time, I thought I needed a driver\'s license, and I enrolled in a driver\'s license school with the money I earned from a part-time job.
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>> During that time, I thought I should get a driver’s license so I enrolled in driving school using the money I earned from my part-time job.
The tuition was about 700,000 won ($ 506).
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I still remember what the private instructor said at that time.
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>> I remember what the driving instructor said.
\"If the direction I want to go is to the right, turn the steering wheel to the right; if it\'s to the left, turn the steering wheel to the left.\"
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He words were very simple and easy to understand.>> His words were very simple and easy to understand.
Cars are essential to our lives.
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>> Cars are necessities to our lives.
If you have a child who is going to be an adult, we encourage you to get a driver\'s license.
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>> A child who is turning into an adult is encouraged to get a driver’s license.
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