Homework
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Q: What are the ideal qualities of a good boss?
A: I think it\'s a balanced personality.
I think for leaders or bosses, they need those strict and serious personality while they\'re doing their jobs, but sometimes they need to be good.
If their workers are too tired or depressed, they need to console and be lenient.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. I think for leaders or bosses, they need those strict and serious personality while they\'re doing their jobs, but sometimes they need to be good.
3. If their workers are too tired or depressed, they need to console and be lenient.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think it\'s a balanced personality.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think for leaders or bosses, they need those strict and serious personality while they\'re doing their jobs, but sometimes they need to be good.
>>I think leaders or bosses need those strict and serious personality while they\'re doing their jobs, but sometimes they also need to be good.
3. If their workers are too tired or depressed, they need to console and be lenient.
>>If their workers are too tired or depressed, they need to console them and be lenient with them.
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