homework

2024-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. T. Sharon! This is my homework. I would like to change my personality more confident. I think that I\'m so nervous when I speak in English or else. So I want to have confidence on my personality. I want to become a confident person when I speak anything! Good night! bye bye~~

강사 첨삭

Hi Irene!
You tried out a new pattern here.
Keep doing that because it\'s really good practice.
I teach you some new terms in our classes.
Try to remember and always use those expressions.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I would like to change my personality more confident.

>> I would like to change my personality and be more confident.

I think that I\'m so nervous when I speak in English or else.

>> I think that I\'m so nervous when I speak in English and other languages.
So I want to have confidence on my personality.

>> Correct

I want to become a confident person when I speak anything!

>> I want to become a confident person when I speak.

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