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Do you believe in angels?
I\'m not sure but I want to believe in angels.
We can\'t see them actually.
So, we can guess them like Tinkerbell.
And I think they seem to be protecting us.
Therefore, I want to believe them entirely.
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Hi [이름]mi!^^
We can\'t see them actually.
So, we can guess them like Tinkerbell.
And I think they seem to be protecting us.
Therefore, I want to believe them entirely.
I always believe in angels.
We may not see them with our naked eye nor feel them, I know that they protect us.
Andrea
I\'m not sure but I want to believe in angels.
>> Correct
We can\'t see them actually.
>> We can\'t actually see them.
So, we can guess them like Tinkerbell.
>> So we can guess them like Tinkerbell.
And I think they seem to be protecting us.
>> Correct
Therefore, I want to believe them entirely.
>> Therefore, I want to entirely believe in them.
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