Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I know the history of perfume.
Long time ago, women who were high position in French.
They wore a dress which coudn’t take them off easily at the gathering.
They peed with wearing dress.
So they needed something to hide smell of pee and sweat.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]ny!
You know what? These are the things that I often think about but fail to get information on. There are so many things I would kike to know like the history of pens, bath soap, etc.
Thank you for sharing this! And it sounds \"funny\"^^
Aki~
I know the history of perfume.
>>> CORRECT!
Long time ago, women who were high position in French.
>>> A long time ago, women who were in high positions in France
>>> A long time ago, some women held a high position in France.
They wore a dress which coudn’t take them off easily at the gathering.
>>>> They wore dresses that couldn\'t;t be easily taken off at gatherings.
They peed with wearing dress.
>>> They peed on their dresses.
So they needed something to hide smell of pee and sweat.
>>> So they needed something to hide the smell of pee and sweat.
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