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If I have free time in the morning, I want to watch more TV. It\'s a shame that I can\'t concentrate and watch because the time I get ready to go to work overlaps with the TV program I want to watch. The title of the program is \"Human Theater\". It is a human documentary program that starts at 7:50 am and ends at 8:20 am. It is a program produced by closely covering the real lives of ordinary people in Korea. I like this program because watching \"Human Theater\" can broaden the range of empathy for the three of others and give an opportunity to reflect on one\'s own life.
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I think this is very interesting show, Mia. It seems that you are learning a lot from this program. ^^
-Khai
If I have free time in the morning, I want to watch more TV.
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>> I want to spend more time watching the TV if I have free time in the morning.
It\'s a shame that I can\'t concentrate and watch because the time I get ready to go to work overlaps with the TV program I want to watch.
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>> The time I get ready to work overlaps with the TV show I want to watch, so I can’t focus on seeing it.
The title of the program is \"Human Theater\".
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It is a human documentary program that starts at 7:50 am and ends at 8:20 am.
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>> It is a documentary show from 7:50 a.m. to 8:20 a.m.
It is a program produced by closely covering the real lives of ordinary people in Korea.
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>> It features the real lives of ordinary people living in Korea.
I like this program because watching \"Human Theater\" can broaden the range of empathy for the three of others and give an opportunity to reflect on one\'s own life.
>> I like this program because watching \"Human Theater\" can broaden the range of empathy for others and allow reflecting on one\'s own life.
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