homework
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HOMEWORK: Please write a short paragraph about \"Do you want to change your status in life? why or why not? ”
Yes, I want to change my status.
I want to be born as rich as possible. My parents aren\'t bad people, but I don\'t think it would be a bad idea to be born the daughter of a richer person.
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Hi, Jessica!
Thank you so much for answering your homework :)
I really appreciate it!
Please continue writing your homework for faster improvements. :)
YOU ARE EXCELLENT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
-T.NIKKI ^^
Yes, I want to change my status.
>> Yes, I want to change my status in life.
I want to be born as rich as possible.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> I want to be born rich as much as possible.
My parents aren\'t bad people, but I don\'t think it would be a bad idea to be born the daughter of a richer person.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> My parents aren\'t bad people, but I think it would be a good idea to be born the daughter of a rich family.
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