Homework

2024-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Khai

학생이 쓴 원문

The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea. Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes. It is also a place where travelers\' freedom is overflowing. Best 2 - Yeosu City Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live. Best 3 - Gangneung City Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby. Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed. \"It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing these cities, Mia. Very good! You have described them well.
-Khai
The best 3 cities I want to live in Korea.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> Here are the three (3) best cities that I want to live in South Korea.
Best 1 - Jeju Seogwipo City
>> 1. Jeju Seogwipo City
You can go sea fishing seasonally, and there are many pretty pub cafes.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> You can go sea fishing seasonally. There are also many aesthetic pub cafes.
It is also a place where travelers\' freedom is overflowing.
>> CORRECT
Best 2 - Yeosu City
>> 2. Yeosu City
Yeosu City, where camellia blooms and has a camellia island, is a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.
>> Yeosu City is the city where camellia blooms. It has a camellia island. It is also a place where cute and old-fashioned emotions live.
Best 3 - Gangneung City
>> 3. Gangneung City
Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains and seas nearby.
>> Gangneung is a city on the east coast with lakes, mountains, and seas nearby.
Among the cities of Gangwon Province, the infrastructure is well developed.
>> CORRECT
\"It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo and Gyeongpo.
>> It is a beautiful city to Mt. Seorak, Gyeongpo, and Gyeongpo.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기