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I have a very small garden. Every spring I plant lettuce, pumpkin, potatoes and peppers. It is my favorite thing these days to watch the crops grow well because of the occasional rain.In the past, I was not interested in growing something on the ground, but I feel fun touching the soil and watching the vegetables that my family eat grow.
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I think it is very therapeutic to grow a garden like yours, Mia. ^^ Thank you for sharing! ^^
-Khai
I have a very small garden.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I have a tiny garden.
Every spring I plant lettuce, pumpkin, potatoes and peppers.
>> Every spring, I plant lettuce, pumpkin, potatoes, and peppers.
It is my favorite thing these days to watch the crops grow well because of the occasional rain.
>>CORRECT
OR
>> These days, I like to watch the crops grow well because of the occasional rain.
In the past, I was not interested in growing something on the ground, but I feel fun touching the soil and watching the vegetables that my family eat grow.
>> In the past, I was not interested in growing something on the ground, but I feel the fun of touching the soil and watching the vegetables that my family eats grow.
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