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Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of adventurous trips?
A: I think the advantage of adventurous trip is that one can experience a lot of things.
I think in people\'s life, experience would be one of the most important things, and if they go on an adventurous trip, than they can gain those.
But I think the disadvantage of it is they will easily get tired.
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2. I think in people\'s life, experience would be one of the most important things, and if they go on an adventurous trip, than they can gain those.
3. But I think the disadvantage of it is they will easily get tired.
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1. I think the advantage of adventurous trip is that one can experience a lot of things.
>>I think the advantage of an adventurous trip is that one can experience a lot of things.
2. I think in people\'s life, experience would be one of the most important things, and if they go on an adventurous trip, than they can gain those.
>>I think in people\'s lives, experience would be one of the most important things, and if they go on an adventurous trip, then they can gain those.
3. But I think the disadvantage of it is they will easily get tired.
>>However, I think the disadvantage of it is that they will easily get tired.
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