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학생이 쓴 원문
I think wearing purple is difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly.
Orange is neon light people who is going on a trip they like to appeal their enjoyment.
Red means cooperation and strong willings.
They wear it to pray their wish.sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team.
I think beautiful is wearing natural color not standing out.
I preper wearing down toned color.
We call it dead color. It feels calm and gorgeous.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]ny!
Gee, thank you for expanding your thought by giving your answers in detail. You know in my case, I love any shades of beige. But wearing almost the same color every day will catch the attention of many people.
Have a good day!
Aki~
I think wearing purple is difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly.
>>> I think wearing purple makes it difficult to match other clothes so it feels artificial and groomly.
>> I find it challenging to match purple with other clothes, which makes it look artificial and awkward
Orange is neon light people who is going on a trip they like to appeal their enjoyment.
>>> Orange is a neon light for people who are going on a trip they like to appeal to their enjoyment.
Red means cooperation and strong willing.
>>> Red means cooperation and strong willingness.
They wear it to pray their wish.sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team.
>>> They wear it to pray for their wish. sometimes the aim can be for a country or a team.
I think beautiful is wearing natural color not standing out.
>>> I think being beautiful is wearing natural colors not standing out.
I preper wearing down toned color.
>>> I prefer wearing down toned color.
We call it dead color. It feels calm and gorgeous.
>>> CORRECT!
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