Homework
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Q: Why is a good personality needed in a person\'s life?
A: I think a good personality is needed in a person\'s life because it makes that person to be closer with others easier.
If a person has a good personality, a lot of people near that person will like him, or even though people don\'t like him, they won\'t hate him.
But even if that person doesn\'t have a good personality, if it\'s not bad, then I think it doesn\'t matter.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. If a person has a good personality, a lot of people near that person will like him, or even though people don\'t like him, they won\'t hate him.
3. But even if that person doesn\'t have a good personality, if it\'s not bad, then I think it doesn\'t matter.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think a good personality is needed in a person\'s life because it makes that person to be closer with others easier.
>>I think a good personality is needed in a person\'s life because it makes that person closer with others much easier.
2. If a person has a good personality, a lot of people near that person will like him, or even though people don\'t like him, they won\'t hate him.
>>If a person has a good personality, a lot of people near him will like him, or even though people don\'t like him, they won\'t really hate him.
3. But even if that person doesn\'t have a good personality, if it\'s not bad, then I think it doesn\'t matter.
>>But even if that person doesn\'t have a good personality, if it\'s not that bad, then I think it doesn\'t matter.
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