Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What kind of friendship do you wish to have?
A: I think I don\'t need anyone else right now for my friend.
I think it\'s good to have more friends, but even if I can\'t, it doesn\'t matter because I don\'t need them to do more than that.
And I think I\'ll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think it\'s good to have more friends, but even if I can\'t, it doesn\'t matter because I don\'t need them to do more than that.
3. And I think I\'ll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think I don\'t need anyone else right now for my friend.
>>I think I don\'t need anyone else right now for a friend.
2. I think it\'s good to have more friends, but even if I can\'t, it doesn\'t matter because I don\'t need them to do more than that.
>>I think it\'s good to have many friends, but not having more doesn\'t really matter because I don\'t need them to do more than that.
3. And I think I\'ll naturally have more friends by the time goes.
>> I think I\'ll naturally have more friends as the time goes by.
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