homework

2024-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

hello T sharon! This is my homework. I feel gloomy when I hear about that. And I also feel anxious too. Then I\'m angry the peolpe that gossip me. But I\'m scared when I\'m angry with the people, and they think that I am strange. Good night!

강사 첨삭

Hi Irene!
You impressed me so much with this composition
I applaud the quality of your work.
I think you just need to focus on sentence patterns.
However, your ideas and expressions are truly outstanding.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I feel gloomy when I hear about that.

>> Correct

And I also feel anxious too.

>> I feel anxious, too.

Then I\'m angry the peolpe that gossip me.

>> I get angry when people gossip about me.
But I\'m scared when I\'m angry with the people, and they think that I am strange.

>> However, I feel scared when I\'m angry with people and they also think that I am strange.

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