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Q: What could be the benefit/s of watching reality shows or sitcoms?
A: I think the benefits of watching reality shows is they can be related easier.
Since it\'s made of real, or it\'s a real situation, there would be more situations when people can relate more.
And I think for sitcoms, people can have more fun with them.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Since it\'s made of real, or it\'s a real situation, there would be more situations when people can relate more.
3. And I think for sitcoms, people can have more fun with them.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think the benefits of watching reality shows is they can be related easier.
>>I think the benefit of watching reality shows is that they can be easily relatable.
2. Since it\'s made of real, or it\'s a real situation, there would be more situations when people can relate more.
>>Since it\'s made of real situations, people would relate to them more.
3. And I think for sitcoms, people can have more fun with them.
>>As for sitcoms, I think people can have more fun with them.
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