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I agree with Melanie\'s opinion. Because I think if cheaters are suspended from shool some students who don\'t want to go to school may think use this rule for bad purpose.
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Hello, Henry!
I see your point. Suspending cheaters might inadvertently give ideas to those who are already inclined to avoid school. It\'s definitely a complex issue to address.
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with Melanie\'s opinion. Because I think if cheaters are suspended from shool some students who don\'t want to go to school may think use this rule for bad purpose.
>> I agree with Melanie\'s opinion because I think if cheaters are suspended from school, some students who don\'t want to attend may misuse this rule.
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