Homework
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Q: What is your favorite music genre and why?
A: My favorite music genre is pop song.
I like pop song because it\'s modern, and it\'s also very stylish because every characteristics are set by the artist.
And I also like ballads.
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2. I like pop song because it\'s modern, and it\'s also very stylish because every characteristics are set by the artist.
3. And I also like ballads.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. My favorite music genre is pop song.
>>My favorite music genre is pop.
2. I like pop song because it\'s modern, and it\'s also very stylish because every characteristics are set by the artist.
>>I like pop because it\'s modern, and it\'s also very stylish because every characteristic is set by the artist.
3. And I also like ballads.
>>I also like ballads.
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