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Hi Su,
I am glad to hear you arrived safely. You should be proud of yourself that you are starting to communicate in English. I’m looking forward to our class later! ^^
-Teacher Ash
Finally, I arrived in Australia.
>> CORRECT
I thought well done my-self about I came here with my friend.
>> I thought I did a good job for coming here with a friend.
Because though I don’t speaking English very well, my friend don’t speaking it well more than me.
>> It is because even if I struggle in speaking the language, my friend struggles even more.
But she hear English well more than me.
>>However, she is more expose to listening to English than me.
So when we resolved some problems, she told me what’s mean.
>> So, when we were trying to resolve some issues, she told me what it means.
And I told answer to them.
>> Then, I responded in English.
For example, when we made a account in bank and when the owner told about explain of accomodation.
>> For example, when we were creating a new account, the owner explained to us, and my friend would relay what it means, and I try to answer them.
We decided a share house now.
>> We decided to live in a shared house.
We’ll live in the house form next week!
>> We will live in the house starting next week.
I’ll talk more today! :)
>> I’ll talk more about it today.
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