Homework
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Can you give me 3 benefits that you can get from using a computer?
—> Benefits that I can get from using a computer are getting many informations, watching interesting videos and doing school projects.
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Nice work, [이름] Ju! Keep up the good work!
Benefits that I can get from using a computer are getting many informations, watching interesting videos and doing school projects.
-Teacher Angela
QUESTION: Can you give me 3 benefits that you can get from using a computer?
Benefits that I can get from using a computer are getting many informations, watching interesting videos and doing school projects.
>> The benefits I can get from using a computer include accessing a lot of information, watching interesting videos, and completing school projects.
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