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학생이 쓴 원문
Korean enjoys doing exercise.
We think the standard of beauty is slime.
So we do exercise to be more slim at first. Time goes by, doing exercise becomes thier habit. I feel anxious if I didn’t do exercise.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]ny!
Having a disciplined mind leads to a better life.
If we want to be healthy, we have to change our lifestyle. Same with improving oneself.
Don\'t get tired doing something for yourself :)
Aki~
Korean enjoys doing exercise.
>>> Most Koreans enjoy exercising.
We think the standard of beauty is slime.
>>> We believe that the standard of beauty is flawed
So we do exercise to be more slim at first.
>>> CORRECT!
Time goes by, doing exercise becomes thier habit. I feel anxious if I didn’t do exercise.
>>> Time goes by, and exercising becomes their habit. I feel anxious if I don\'t exercise
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