Homework
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Q: What are the reasons why some people become pessimists?
A: I think it\'s because they\'ve already did a lot of things.
And by their experience, they might realized that they succeed in every situation, so they might chose to think bad in the first time.
Also, I think there are some people who comforts thinking bad.
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Thank you for doing your homework.
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Here are some notes:
1. I think it\'s because they\'ve already did a lot of things.
>>I think it\'s because they\'ve already done a lot of things.
2. And by their experience, they might realized that they succeed in every situation, so they might chose to think bad in the first time.
>>By their experience, they might realize that they succeed in every situation, so they might choose to think bad the first time.
3. Also, I think there are some people who comforts thinking bad.
>>Also, I think there are some people who finds comfort in thinking bad.
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