Homework
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Q: What kind of car do you prefer to have in the future?
A: I prefer a car with a good efficiency.
I think the outfit of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.
Also, I want a car which more people can ride.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think the outfit of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.
3. Also, I want a car which more people can ride.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I prefer a car with a good efficiency.
>>I prefer a car with good efficiency.
2. I think the outfit of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.
>>I think the appearance of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.
3. Also, I want a car which more people can ride.
>>Also, I want a car which can accommodate more people.
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