HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Q: What’s the most memorable vacation you’ve had?
A: I remember trip to Russia with my family. Because the aquarium and sea is very beautiful.
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I remember trip to Russia with my family.
>>> CORRECT!
Because the aquarium and sea is very beautiful.
>>> The aquarium and the sea was very beautiful.
>>> The aquarium and the sea was very beautiful.
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