Homework
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Q: What is an ideal roommate for you?
A: I think my ideal roommate is someone who\'s kind and not nosy.
I think every people likes kind person because they won\'t get angry either, and also my roommate being nosy means I have less privacy.
And I don\'t care about other things.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. I think every people likes kind person because they won\'t get angry either, and also my roommate being nosy means I have less privacy.
3. And I don\'t care about other things.
Thank you for answering your homework question.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think my ideal roommate is someone who\'s kind and not nosy.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think every people likes kind person because they won\'t get angry either, and also my roommate being nosy means I have less privacy.
>>I think every person likes a kind one because they won\'t get angry either. Also, my roommate being nosy means I will have less privacy.
>>I don\'t care about the other things.
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