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2024-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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Q: What are some things to consider when living alone? A: I think the most important thing to consider is expense. If a person can\'t handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house. Also I think the chores and the food is what people need to consider.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think the most important thing to consider is expense.
>>I think the most important thing to consider is the expense.

2. If a person can\'t handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house.
>>If a person couldn\'t handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house.

3. Also I think the chores and the food is what people need to consider.
>>Also, I think the chores and the food are what people should also consider.

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