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2012-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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I went to lotteworld like Disneyland with my friend last sunday. Though we bought passes for all the rides, we only rode a few of them due to the crowd. I had to wait about two our to ride the gyroswing. But it was o.k with me because there were not only ride, but also various performances to watch. The moonlight parade was really fantastic. I felt as if I were a child. My friend was afraid of riding the thriller rides. She had a little dizz. but It was so fun with my friend. I will come ( or visit ?? go??? ) here again. It is my pleasure to enjoy going to an amusement park. Until dying I will go threr regularly. 1. A man who isn't married is a _bachelor._ 2. Another word meaning "luggage" is _baggage.__ 3. Someone whose job is to cut hair is called a __barber._ 4. Someone without socks or shoes on is _bare foot.__ (or bare feet?) 5. Someone who breaks into houses is a _burglar.__

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Hello there^_^ Thank you so much for sending your homework as well as your composition^_^ Great job^_^Keep it up. And oh, I wish I can also go to the lotteworld with you^_^ T. Razel I went to lotteworld like Disneyland with my friend last sunday. >>>CORRECTThough we bought passes for all the rides, we only rode a few of them due to the crowd. >>>CORRECTI had to wait about two our to ride the gyroswing. >>>I had to wait about two hours to ride the \"gyroswing\"But it was o.k with me because there were not only ride, but also various performances to watch. >>>But it was okay/ok with me because you can\'t only enjoy rides there but there were also various performances to watch.The moonlight parade was really fantastic. >>>CORRECTI felt as if I were a child. >>>CORRECTMy friend was afraid of riding the thriller rides. >>>CORRECTShe had a little dizz. but It was so fun with my friend. >>>She felt a little dizzy but It was so fun to be with my friend.I will come ( or visit ?? go??? ) here again. >>>I will go there again.( visit and go would be okay dear^_^)It is my pleasure to enjoy going to an amusement park. >>>CORRECTUntil dying I will go threr regularly. >>>I will go there regularly even if I get older and older.1. A man who isn\'t married is a _bachelor._ >>>CORRECT2. Another word meaning \"luggage\" is _baggage.__ >>>CORRECT3. Someone whose job is to cut hair is called a __barber._ >>>CORRECT4. Someone without socks or shoes on is _bare foot.__ (or bare feet?) >>>Someone without socks or shoes on is _barefoot_5. Someone who breaks into houses is a _burglar.__ >>>CORRECT

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