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2024-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think saying \"hello\" is important because it means I respect other people, so if I say \"hello\" to other people they will respect me, too. Why is saying \"hello\" important?

강사 첨삭

Hi Henry,

Great job on your homework! You\'re absolutely right about this topic, saying hello shows respect and sets a positive tone for interactions with others. Thank you for taking the time to complete your assignment. I appreciate your effort and I hope to see you again soon!

~Teacher Cathy

I think saying \"hello\" is important because it means I respect other people, so if I say \"hello\" to other people they will respect me, too.

>>CORRECT

OR>>I believe saying \"hello\" is important because it shows respect to other people. When I greet others with \"hello,\" it signals that I value them, and in return, they are more likely to respect me as well.

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