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Q: What makes a party memorable for the people attending it?
A: I think the events in the party makes it memorable for the attendees.
If people attend to a party and it\'s just as usual, then it wouldn\'t be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
Also, I think who they\'re with affects the party.
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2. If people attend to a party and it\'s just as usual, then it wouldn\'t be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
3. Also, I think who they\'re with affects the party.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think the events in the party makes it memorable for the attendees.
>>I think the events in the party make it memorable for the attendees.
2. If people attend to a party and it\'s just as usual, then it wouldn\'t be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
>>If people attend a party and it\'s just as usual, then it wouldn\'t be memorable. But if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
3. Also, I think who they\'re with affects the party.
>>CORRECT!
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