homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello! T. Sharon! This is my homework.
If I am richest person in the world,
first, I would like to go to the abroad trips with my parents.
Second, I want to spend money on playing games.
Last, I will donate money for poor.
Bye bye! Good night!
강사 첨삭
Hi Irene!
That\'s an interesting thought.
Thank you for expressing your view today.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I am richest person in the world, first, I would like to go to the abroad trips with my parents.
>> If I were the richest person in the world, I would like to go on trips abroad with my parents.
Second, I want to spend money on playing games.
Second, I want to spend money on playing games.
>> Correct
Last, I will donate money for poor.
Last, I will donate money for poor.
>> Last, I will donate money to the poor.
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