HOMEWORK

2012-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Trisha

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Homework : What is the oldest memory you have? Explain. The oldest memory I have is of when I was about 7 or 8 years old. I remember that I went to the Independence Hall with grandparents. I was so happy. Because that place had many marvel things in it. I gazed those things. And that I lost my grandparents. Finally they found me, but I was surprised. A good memory turned to a bad one. Trisha, I was so sick yesterday. So I couldn't focus on a class. sorry..

강사 첨삭

Hello!!! ^ ^ WOW! You have very good writing skills! ^ ^ I wonder how much more you could write. I am very curious. Please keep them coming. : ) I guess as children, we all took our turns getting lost at some point. (He he he : ) ) It\'s good that your grandparents found you!!! Or else, I wouldn\'t have the opportunity to meet you! ^ ^ Please don\'t worry about being sick. I completely understand. : ) Good job! ^ ^ T. Trisha Homework : What is the oldest memory you have? Explain.1. The oldest memory I have is of when I was about 7 or 8 years old. >>>CORRECT 2. I remember that I went to the Independence Hall with grandparents. >>>I remember that I went to the Independence Hall with my grandparents. 3. I was so happy. >>>CORRECT 4. Because that place had many marvel things in it. >>>I was so happy because that place had many marvelous things in it. 5. I gazed those things. >>>I gazed upon those things. >>>OR I gazed on those things. >>>OR I gazen on them. 6. And that I lost my grandparents. >>>I was so busy gazing on those things that I lost my grandparents. >>>OR I was so engrossed with those things that I got lost. >>>OR I was so engrossed with those things that I realized I could not find my grandparents. 7. Finally they found me, but I was surprised. >>>CORRECT 8. A good memory turned to a bad one. >>>CORRECT9. Trisha, I was so sick yesterday. >>>CORRECT 10. So I couldn\'t focus on a class. >>>So I couldn\'t focus in class. 11. sorry.. >>>Sorry.

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