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The most terrible effect of the war I know is that innocent people die. Because most citizens don\'t want to go to war. But innocent people die because some selfish people start a war for more land.
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The most terrible effect of the war I know is that innocent people die.
- Teacher Angela
>> The most devastating effect of war, in my opinion, is the loss of innocent lives.
Because most citizens don\'t want to go to war.
>> CORRECT
But innocent people die because some selfish people start a war for more land.
>> But innocent people die because of some selfish people who start a war to conquer more land.
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