Homework
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Q: What are the benefits of taking photos and/or videos?
A: I think one of the benefits of taking photos and videos is it can store a memory for a long time.
Even if it\'s not a memory, it\'s good to store some data by photos or videos because it\'s easy to understand with those.
Also, it\'s good to show others.
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Hi, [이름]!
2. Even if it\'s not a memory, it\'s good to store some data by photos or videos because it\'s easy to understand with those.
3. Also, it\'s good to show others.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think one of the benefits of taking photos and videos is it can store a memory for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
2. Even if it\'s not a memory, it\'s good to store some data by photos or videos because it\'s easy to understand with those.
>>Even if it\'s not a memory, it\'s good to store some data by taking photos or videos because it\'s easy to understand with those.
3. Also, it\'s good to show others.
>>Also, it\'s good to show them to others.
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