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I think students don\'t need to bring lunch box because studnt can bond with their friends by eating lunch together and the lunch in school is also good for studen\'s health.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Henry! I see your point! Eating lunch together at school can definitely be a great way for students to bond and socialize. Plus, having nutritious options available in the school cafeteria is important for maintaining good health.
~ Teacher Maxine
I think students don\'t need to bring lunch box because studnt can bond with their friends by eating lunch together and the lunch in school is also good for studen\'s health.
>> I think students don\'t need to bring a lunchbox because they can bond with their friends by eating lunch together, and the lunch in school is also good for students\' health.
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