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2024-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Angela

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I once invited my friends to my house. I invited my friends and played board games at home and played games using TV. I also had a snack with them.

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Thanks for the effort, [이름] [이름]! You have been showing great improvement. Keep it up!
- Teacher Angela

I once invited my friends to my house. 
>> CORRECT

I invited my friends and played board games at home and played games using TV. 
>> I invited my friends over and played board games at home, and we also played games using the TV.

I also had a snack with them.
>> CORRECT



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