Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q : Can you name three jobs you can be good at?
A : First of all, I can do well in planning work. And I can be good at sales and teaching someone.
Q : What factors influence a career choice?
A : First of all, work and life should be balanced, and secondly, the salary should be high.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Steve!
Thank you for sharing your strengths and priorities. I agree that work-life balance is crucial, and competitive compensation is important.
~ Teacher Maxine
First of all, I can do well in planning work. And I can be good at sales and teaching someone.
>> CORRECT
OR >> First of all, I excel in planning work, and I have strong abilities in sales and teaching.
First of all, work and life should be balanced, and secondly, the salary should be high.
>> CORRECT
OR >> First of all, I believe in maintaining a balance between work and life, and I also prioritize competitive compensation. These factors are essential for me when considering any opportunity.
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