Homework
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Q: Which is better in taking photos/videos, a real camera or a phone? Why?
A: I think a real camera is better.
I think they have their own advantages, for a real camera, they can take a picture in a higher resolution.
For phone, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.
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2. I think they have their own advantages, for a real camera, they can take a picture in a higher resolution.
3. For phone, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.
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Here are some considerations:
1. I think a real camera is better.
>>CORRECT!
2. I think they have their own advantages, for a real camera, they can take a picture in a higher resolution.
>>I think they have their own advantages, but a real camera can take a picture in a higher resolution.
3. For phone, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.
>>As for phones, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.
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