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I agree with David\'s opinion because I think if I hope to succeed or improve myself I have to know what I need to do and do hard work.
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Hello, Henry! I see your point. Success usually comes from knowing what needs to be done and putting in the effort to make it happen. It\'s all about determination and hard work! :)
~ Teacher Maxine
I agree with David\'s opinion because I think if I hope to succeed or improve myself I have to know what I need to do and do hard work.
>> I agree with David\'s opinion because I believe that in order to succeed or improve myself, I must know what needs to be done and put in hard work.
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